:o hrrm~ *thinks* Okay 8D suggestion time 8D except I doubt any of them will really be of any use~ but hey :D *tries*
That seems like it'd make a good prologue nee :o Especially since you ended on "It had been love, once." which is a pretty strong line. So perhaps you could launch into some flashbacks or maybe alternate between having flashbacks and having current-time stuff o_o [xD *horrible at explaining self*
Or~ you could do a chapter on what Gackt thinks and then Hyde and Gackt and stuff 8D *shrug*
o_o xD or you could just write about Hyde living his life all lonely and sad and then make Gackt reappear again and then o_o something 8D *fails*
xD Gosh~ sorry I'm not of much help nutmeg~! But I do like what you've written so far :D and I hope your muses can come back from their vacation in Tahiti and help you add more to this lovely piece of Gakuhai :D <3
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That seems like it'd make a good prologue nee :o Especially since you ended on "It had been love, once." which is a pretty strong line. So perhaps you could launch into some flashbacks or maybe alternate between having flashbacks and having current-time stuff o_o [xD *horrible at explaining self*
Or~ you could do a chapter on what Gackt thinks and then Hyde and Gackt and stuff 8D *shrug*
o_o xD or you could just write about Hyde living his life all lonely and sad and then make Gackt reappear again and then o_o something 8D *fails*
xD Gosh~ sorry I'm not of much help nutmeg~! But I do like what you've written so far :D and I hope your muses can come back from their vacation in Tahiti and help you add more to this lovely piece of Gakuhai :D <3