poetry

[gnutmeg]

April is National Poetry Month. To celebrate, I am posting one of my poems every day. You can play along too! Or, if you don't write, post a poem that you love. I would love to see my friendslist filled with poetry all through April.


Today's poem is one of my newer works. It was written for someone I've become very close to only recently. She's been encouraging my recent flood of words, and having one of her own as well. (Yes, she knows this is hers.)


Sister King

your god is golden
ancient sky creator
while mine are defeated
fornicating in the dirt

eternally similar
green gods, never the same
what label for a shape
they know who we are

in name we are none
but sisters heart and heart
mouth and ear, hand and cheek
spider thin change of pace

passion is strength that kills
and desire cunning weakness
it was my death that found you

Tanatos brought me to you
my great lord bowed between us
granting you my sin of words

a parade of secrets
kissing eye to eye to voice
but hands say more in passing
taking from your needs

sister, stand up! sing out!
be vanity's voice unreasoned
I shall love you as my moon

declare yourself greater
for great king I see you
valiant commander of words
order them to the grave

victory's dawn only rises
over memory's tombstone
farewell, sir night
may you always be a lady

Comments

[agenda.livejournal.com]

Are you looking for any critiques? Just curious, as I'm more than happy to tell you what I like about it. :)

[lauraorganasolo.livejournal.com]

I wish I had the nerve to post poetry. I applaud you.

My favorite lines were "a parade of secrets/ kissing eye to eye to voice/ but hands say more in passing." It's such a neat, interesting image.

There is a sort of a heroic, encouraging tone to this that makes it uplifting to read. It's nice. <3